I added some florescent colors to around the Jordan logo because I think it makes it stand out more. Next I will either add more color around Jordan or maybe some words.
Joan, I like that you included the air jordan symbol, although I'm afraid the size of the symbol detracts from Jordan himself. I think if the sybmbol were smaller it would draw more attention to the main focus of the picture - Jordan. I love what you did with smudging the backgroud, which also indicates you intend Jordan to be the main fixture and in keeping with this theme, I think you would benefit from drawing less attention to the symbol :)
Joan, I like that you included the air jordan symbol, although I'm afraid the size of the symbol detracts from Jordan himself. I think if the sybmbol were smaller it would draw more attention to the main focus of the picture - Jordan. I love what you did with smudging the backgroud, which also indicates you intend Jordan to be the main fixture and in keeping with this theme, I think you would benefit from drawing less attention to the symbol :)
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